Reflecting on writing

For our writing we have been writing Narratives. We have been learning to add a great hook in or opening line to our writing and to start our sentences in different ways.

This week we also had to have a smile and alliteration in our writing. This slide shows my hook in, sentence beginnings, simile and alliteration.

We are using our Kaiwhakarite/Self Manager learning asset by reflecting on our learning.

 

Korowai art!

      

We were learning about collaboration and working with each other. We were also trying to earn hearts (points) and the group with the most points gets a prize. You were only allowed 4 people in your group. It was kinda easy to make a group of 4 with my friends because we are a group of 4. 

I found it easy to choose the 1 of the 4 colors from our group. I chose green but then my friend wanted to swap colors because she didn't want to have yellow. I also found it easy to draw a pattern on all of the feathers. I also found it easy to dye the feathers too. 

I found it hard to fold my piece of paper into long rectangles.   

 

Bio-poem

We were learning about how to make a Bio-poem. First we had to write about what we feel sometimes and then we had to write our moum and dad's name and our sibling's names. I have more than one sibling but I do not know how to spell their names.

I found it easy to write what I love, do my photo, remove my background and say what I am afraid of. I also found it easy to change the shape that my photo is in instead.     

Matilda

 

We were learning to create a movie trailer on powtoons.

I  enjoyed putting the people on my powtoon!

I found it easy to put on the backgrounds.

I found it hard to find the right backgrounds.

Next time I will find the right people for my powtoon by uploading them.

My animal report

 

We were learning to write a report about fortnite,tik tok or a animal and I chose to write about a animal and I chose a panda to write about. I enjoyed putting my report on slides. I found it challenging to find lots of information about a panda. Next time I need to work away from my friends.

FRIDGE MAGNETS!!!

We are learning about quality blog comments on fridge magnets. I found it easy to write on the fridge magnets. I found it hard to put my learning onto my blog. I enjoyed getting to make fridge magnets. Next time I need to do my learning and not talk to my friends.

Heat experiment

I was learning what happens when I put food colouring into different temperature water.I learnt that molecules move faster when they are warmer and slower when they are colder.The drop of food colouring spreads out fastest in the hot water because the three jars.Eventually the food colouring spreads through all three jars.I enjoyed doing the temperature in the three jars.I found it challenging to squeeze out the food colouring and put in the jar.  Next time I need to talk to my group more.